High Backed Armchairs
Feedback on a poem I’ve written?
Could you please tell me your opinions on this poem?
James
We spin with spring and tumble with fall
Lock our troubles behind oak clad doors
Lift up the clouds with silk sodden hands
Swim in the ocean then rest on golden sands
The rush of our dreams collide with reality
Childhood sweethearts and teenage calamities
Living so freely, so together, we fly
Weightless and mobile, high in our sky
Jungles and Outback’s and cities and seas
Those were our journeys, our stories, our keys
Laughter and chatter carried us along
It’s back out there you and me belong
Now I’m alone, lost in my armchair
Life never seems to treat us fair
Do you still play all of our games?
I miss you, my baby James
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I really love that poem, because of how descriptive you were, but you were still able to bring a flow and rhythm, not to mention rhyme as well! The only critique is the last line, because it just doesn’t seem to fit right. The poem is very deep and emotional, and then when you use the term ‘baby’, although I know what you were trying to do, it just doesn’t sound right. Maybe try:
“Now I’m alone, lost in my armchair;
life never seems to treat us fair
Do you still play all of our games?
I miss you, oh my darling James
or
I miss you, oh my dear James”
Again, it is really fantastic, so keep writing.
Hope I could be of help.
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